Story Time.....!!!!

@ambarish-PQyoXg • Jul 14, 2011

Once upon a time in a faraway land lived a man by the name Hakim.
He loved everyone, and everyone loved him!

*yay* that rhymes!! 😀

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Ankita Katdare

@abrakadabra • Jul 14, 2011

Once upon a time in a faraway land lived a man by the name Hakim.
He loved everyone, and everyone loved him!
His built was rather slim and his favorite pass time was to swim..

😁

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@ambarish-PQyoXg • Jul 14, 2011

Once upon a time in a faraway land lived a man by the name Hakim.
He loved everyone, and everyone loved him!
His built was rather slim and his favorite pass time was to swim..
And to increase his stamina, he regularly went to the gym.

*we CrazyEngineers are going to write the biggest "Champak" story ever" 😁

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@ambarish-PQyoXg • Jul 14, 2011

Once upon a time in a faraway land lived a man by the name Hakim.
He loved everyone, and everyone loved him!
His built was rather slim and his favorite pass time was to swim..
And to increase his stamina, he regularly went to the gym.
He was fat conscious, so he liked his milk skim,
and he helped people, people who were dim.
For he'd read fast, many books he would skim,
Sure he had an intellect, and intellect had him!

*keep adding people! I'm enjoying this thing! 😁

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@praveenkumar-66Ze92 • Jul 14, 2011

Once upon a time in a faraway land lived a man by the name Hakim.
He loved everyone, and everyone loved him!
His built was rather slim and his favorite pass time was to swim..
And to increase his stamina, he regularly went to the gym.
He was fat conscious, so he liked his milk skim,
and he helped people, people who were dim.
For he'd read fast, many books he would skim,
Sure he had an intellect, and intellect had him!
One day he came across a pond and jumped in,
He saw a really big fish and two large fins!

Wow nice going... 😁

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Whats In Name

@whats-in-name-KdgM7o • Jul 14, 2011

Once upon a time in a faraway land lived a man by the name Hakim.
He loved everyone, and everyone loved him!
His built was rather slim and his favorite pass time was to swim..
And to increase his stamina, he regularly went to the gym.
He was fat conscious, so he liked his milk skim,
and he helped people, people who were dim.
For he'd read fast, many books he would skim,
Sure he had an intellect, and intellect had him!
One day he came across a pond and jumped in,
He saw a really big fish and two large fins!
He became scared and took a back spin,

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@ambarish-PQyoXg • Jul 14, 2011

Once upon a time in a faraway land lived a man by the name Hakim.
He loved everyone, and everyone loved him!
His built was rather slim and his favorite pass time was to swim..
And to increase his stamina, he regularly went to the gym.
He was fat conscious, so he liked his milk skim,
and he helped people, people who were dim.
For he'd read fast, many books he would skim,
Sure he had an intellect, and intellect had him!
One day he came across a pond and jumped in,
He saw a really big fish and two large fins!
He became scared and took a back spin,
Hit a rock in the process, and broke his chin!

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Whats In Name

@whats-in-name-KdgM7o • Jul 15, 2011

Once upon a time in a faraway land lived a man by the name Hakim.
He loved everyone, and everyone loved him!
His built was rather slim and his favorite pass time was to swim..
And to increase his stamina, he regularly went to the gym.
He was fat conscious, so he liked his milk skim,
and he helped people, people who were dim.
For he'd read fast, many books he would skim,
Sure he had an intellect, and intellect had him!
One day he came across a pond and jumped in,
He saw a really big fish and two large fins!
He became scared and took a back spin,
Hit a rock in the process, and broke his chin!
Rushed to the doc and said,"May I come in?"

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@anoop-FRTf1L • Jul 15, 2011

Once upon a time in a faraway land lived a man by the name Hakim.
He loved everyone, and everyone loved him!
His built was rather slim and his favorite pass time was to swim..
And to increase his stamina, he regularly went to the gym.
He was fat conscious, so he liked his milk skim,
and he helped people, people who were dim.
For he'd read fast, many books he would skim,
Sure he had an intellect, and intellect had him!
One day he came across a pond and jumped in,
He saw a really big fish and two large fins!
He became scared and took a back spin,
Hit a rock in the process, and broke his chin!
Rushed to the doc and said,"May I come in?"
"Oh sure you can", she said with a grin.

P.S. Good to know a lot of creative minds exist in CE.

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@praveenkumar-66Ze92 • Jul 15, 2011

Once upon a time in a faraway land lived a man by the name Hakim.
He loved everyone, and everyone loved him!
His built was rather slim and his favorite pass time was to swim..
And to increase his stamina, he regularly went to the gym.
He was fat conscious, so he liked his milk skim,
and he helped people, people who were dim.
For he'd read fast, many books he would skim,
Sure he had an intellect, and intellect had him!
One day he came across a pond and jumped in,
He saw a really big fish and two large fins!
He became scared and took a back spin,
Hit a rock in the process, and broke his chin!
Rushed to the doc and said,"May I come in?"
"Oh sure you can", she said with a grin.
Then he came in, the doc took a tin,

PS: Out of ideas, continue please... 😛

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@anoop-FRTf1L • Jul 16, 2011

Once upon a time in a faraway land lived a man by the name Hakim.
He loved everyone, and everyone loved him!
His built was rather slim and his favorite pass time was to swim..
And to increase his stamina, he regularly went to the gym.
He was fat conscious, so he liked his milk skim,
and he helped people, people who were dim.
For he'd read fast, many books he would skim,
Sure he had an intellect, and intellect had him!
One day he came across a pond and jumped in,
He saw a really big fish and two large fins!
He became scared and took a back spin,
Hit a rock in the process, and broke his chin!
Rushed to the doc and said,"May I come in?"
"Oh sure you can", she said with a grin.
Then he WENT in, the doc took a tin,
Which contained what many would call a serpentine of a syringe!

P.S. Let there be a twist!!! 😉 Wonders who's up for the challenge to create a twist???😁

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@praveenkumar-66Ze92 • Jul 16, 2011

Once upon a time in a faraway land lived a man by the name Hakim.
He loved everyone, and everyone loved him!
His built was rather slim and his favorite pass time was to swim..
And to increase his stamina, he regularly went to the gym.
He was fat conscious, so he liked his milk skim,
and he helped people, people who were dim.
For he'd read fast, many books he would skim,
Sure he had an intellect, and intellect had him!
One day he came across a pond and jumped in,
He saw a really big fish and two large fins!
He became scared and took a back spin,
Hit a rock in the process, and broke his chin!
Rushed to the doc and said,"May I come in?"
"Oh sure you can", she said with a grin.
Then he WENT in, the doc took a tin,
Which contained what many would call a serpentine of a syringe!
He was shocked to let it in,
But the doc said it is better when in!

Continue... 😛

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@anoop-FRTf1L • Jul 16, 2011

Once upon a time in a faraway land lived a man by the name Hakim.
He loved everyone, and everyone loved him!
His built was rather slim and his favorite pass time was to swim..
And to increase his stamina, he regularly went to the gym.
He was fat conscious, so he liked his milk skim,
and he helped people, people who were dim.
For he'd read fast, many books he would skim,
Sure he had an intellect, and intellect had him!
One day he came across a pond and jumped in,
He saw a really big fish and two large fins!
He became scared and took a back spin,
Hit a rock in the process, and broke his chin!
Rushed to the doc and said,"May I come in?"
"Oh sure you can", she said with a grin.
Then he WENT in, the doc took a tin,
Which contained what many would call a serpentine of a syringe!
He was shocked to let it in,
But the doc said it is better when in.
Hakim didn't dare tend to the damsel's scare.

P.S. Continue :-D

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@praveenkumar-66Ze92 • Jul 16, 2011

Doc is she... And the guy didn't let the syringe or something inside his body... 😀 Now continue the story... 😛

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@anoop-FRTf1L • Jul 16, 2011

Once upon a time in a faraway land lived a man by the name Hakim.
He loved everyone, and everyone loved him!
His built was rather slim and his favorite pass time was to swim..
And to increase his stamina, he regularly went to the gym.
He was fat conscious, so he liked his milk skim,
and he helped people, people who were dim.
For he'd read fast, many books he would skim,
Sure he had an intellect, and intellect had him!
One day he came across a pond and jumped in,
He saw a really big fish and two large fins!
He became scared and took a back spin,
Hit a rock in the process, and broke his chin!
Rushed to the doc and said,"May I come in?"
"Oh sure you can", she said with a grin.
Then he WENT in, the doc took a tin,
Which contained what many would call a serpentine of a syringe!
He was shocked to let it in,
But the doc said it is better when in.
Hakim didn't dare tend to the damsel's scare.
But she was a witch, dressed in a doctor's wig...

P.S. How's the twist? 😛

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@anoop-FRTf1L • Jun 29, 2012

Once upon a time in a faraway land lived a man by the name Hakim.
He loved everyone, and everyone loved him!
His built was rather slim and his favorite pass time was to swim..
And to increase his stamina, he regularly went to the gym.
He was fat conscious, so he liked his milk skim,
and he helped people, people who were dim.
For he'd read fast, many books he would skim,
Sure he had an intellect, and intellect had him!
One day he came across a pond and jumped in,
He saw a really big fish and two large fins!
He became scared and took a back spin,
Hit a rock in the process, and broke his chin!
Rushed to the doc and said,"May I come in?"
"Oh sure you can", she said with a grin.
Then he WENT in, the doc took a tin,
Which contained what many would call a serpentine of a syringe!
He was shocked to let it in,
But the doc said it is better when in.
Hakim didn't dare tend to the damsel's scare.
But she was a witch, dressed in a doctor's wig...
Crafted with care, she spilled her poison,
It got him dosed for quite some season...

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sowjitha

@sowjitha-CHP0qh • Jun 30, 2012

Once upon a time in a faraway land lived a man by the name Hakim.
He loved everyone, and everyone loved him!
His built was rather slim and his favorite pass time was to swim..
And to increase his stamina, he regularly went to the gym.
He was fat conscious, so he liked his milk skim,
and he helped people, people who were dim.
For he'd read fast, many books he would skim,
Sure he had an intellect, and intellect had him!
One day he came across a pond and jumped in,
He saw a really big fish and two large fins!
He became scared and took a back spin,
Hit a rock in the process, and broke his chin!
Rushed to the doc and said,"May I come in?"
"Oh sure you can", she said with a grin.
Then he WENT in, the doc took a tin,
Which contained what many would call a serpentine of a syringe!
He was shocked to let it in,
But the doc said it is better when in.
Hakim didn't dare tend to the damsel's scare.
But she was a witch, dressed in a doctor's wig...
Crafted with care, she spilled her poison,
It got him dosed for quite some season...
But soon there came an angel and she tried to cure his disease

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Ramani Aswath

@ramani-VR4O43 • Jun 30, 2012

A school of fish danced round him:
'See him,chin chin, double chin,
take him, whack him,
hack him that Hakim...

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@anoop-FRTf1L • Nov 8, 2012

Once upon a time in a faraway land lived a man by the name Hakim.
He loved everyone, and everyone loved him!
His built was rather slim and his favorite pass time was to swim..
And to increase his stamina, he regularly went to the gym.
He was fat conscious, so he liked his milk skim,
and he helped people, people who were dim.
For he'd read fast, many books he would skim,
Sure he had an intellect, and intellect had him!
One day he came across a pond and jumped in,
He saw a really big fish and two large fins!
He became scared and took a back spin,
Hit a rock in the process, and broke his chin!
Rushed to the doc and said,"May I come in?"
"Oh sure you can", she said with a grin.
Then he WENT in, the doc took a tin,
Which contained what many would call a serpentine of a syringe!
He was shocked to let it in,
But the doc said it is better when in.
Hakim didn't dare tend to the damsel's scare.
But she was a witch, dressed in a doctor's wig...
Crafted with care, she spilled her poison,
It got him dosed for quite some season...
But soon there came an angel and she tried to cure his disease
A school of fish danced round him:
'See him, chin chin, double chin,
take him, whack him,
hack him that Hakim...'
Hakim felt the burden cease,
But the atmosphere felt a stingy release

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