Shoutbox Warriors: Complete the story

[raj87verma88]

Lets develop the plot further. C'mon every one.

[sauravgoswami]

ok patty,no spice in the story as you mentioned,well after durga increses the speed of engine she suddenly felts something is pulling the ship ,ash mentioned they are heading for a black-hole,all became tensed and increses the power to the fullest,and the ship come in breaking point,but then suddenly an asteriod hits the ship and deflect it form the zone,but the problem aint stop here the rudder is damaged and the asteriod is coming towards the ship.....

[shalini_goel14]

What is going on here? Can anyone tell me in brief why ash and raj87verma88 fighting with guns here including other CEans also?Why so much voilence is created? What is the idea of this thread here? Please tell the whole story till now in brief.

[The_Big_K]

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Thousand Years Of Darkness
The sweet scent of destruction
Mankind's only hope lies in
...
...
The Mysterious Warrior
==.:K:.==

[godfather]

Lets Plot Raj

[mayurpathak]

PS: I didn't know this film was being financed by me

Anyway, Ash is on his way to the nearest planet. Suddenly his engines starts losing its power. The gauge shows the ship is full with nuclear fuel. But the valves have stopped the flow. What? Why? How?

Ash has to act quick. He tries to access fuel pumps. It says Error 41. Shucks! Some one put a deadly virus in the hardware. Now what? He has an escape route. But If the ship is destroyed Gohm will kill Ash.

[raj87verma88]

@Shalini: Ash and I had a game of verbal fight at the CE-Conference. We decided to develop it further and make a science-fiction story, full of action,adventure...etc. Everyone and anyone can help us complete the story. In a few days I will be asking our editor's help to edit and compile the story in a proper way and add some dialogs to spice it up a but. Join us
@Godfather: Yep, let us develop it further. Why don't you pitch in with your ideas? It is fun.
@Mayur: Welcome aboard.

[raj87verma88]

More ideas needed. We have a novel to complete. And then we have to start the shooting of the movie.

[ash]

Okay, there seem to be a gap in between Saurav's and Mayur's action bits

Here goes:
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"Status!" demanded Ash, as he viewed the menacing Asteroid on screen. Durga struggled to maintain distance from the asteroid without falling past the black hole's event horizon.

"The primary rudder thruster is critically damaged, and Fusion shields are down to 65%. Not bad for a direct hit from that thing. Could have been worse" reported Docel.

Gohm cringed at the mention of additional damage to propulsion systems. He glanced sideways to Ash,
"Engine problems at a time like this, between a black hole and an asteroid. Ya know, I should have known better than to be roped into these space adventures of yours..."

Ash glanced back,
"ah but chief, the adventure isn't over yet! Docel, reroute the starboard shield power into the remaining rudder thruster... Ok, that should be enough. Durga, aim for the underside of the asteroid, roll sharply to the left then yaw about..."

"... -20 degrees, skim the gravitational well and full thrust the hell out. Emergency Manoeuvre 11, right? Easy stuff." Durga checked the gyro readings and began repositioning the ship.

"Yeah, easy because you are the best pilot out of the Astro Naval academy! I'm sure sure even the maverick ship escort pilots would wet their pants in this situation. I hope you know what you're doing!" exclaimed Aasima, the ship's navigator.

"Chill, sis. I got this! You guys better hold onto something.." and with a sharp turn of the control stick, the starship jerked into a roll. MaRo, who just entered the bridge, was flung across, crashing onto the communications panels.

"WHAT THE!?!"

"Hold on to something, MaRo. This is going to be rough!"

The ship barely missed the asteroid, and then violently shook from differential gravities between the asteroid and the black hole. Unperturbed, Durga yawed the ship with robotic precision. She checked the gyro readings again, and prompted maxed the thrusters.

It was after a few minutes before everyone else came back from their senses. They all looked at Durga with renewed admiration.

"Nice flying, Durga. Looks like we are finally clear of both those dangers" Ash commented.

Durga smiled and nodded her thanks. Aasima then began re callibrating the navigation module. MaRo walked up to her.

"Your theory was right, Aasima. The navigation system had been tampered with. Good thing the ship path vector was not right into the heart of the black hole. Captain, I think we have a serious computer system breach. This might be related to the Fusion shield tampering incident too. I have created a temporary firewall to safeguard most of the vital systems, but I must narrow down the breach as soon as possible."

Ash shook his head in disbelief. "Its too risky to remain using this ship. We'll need to land at the nearest spaceport as soon as possible. Aasima, is there a way to manually navigate there?"

"I can bring up the old star charts, though I'll need Durga's help in intepreting them. Planet Aeori is now only 14 AU's away."

Gohm chimed in. "I'll work with Docel to optimize the power thrust of the sonic boosters. That should allow enough fuel for us. I just hope no more unexpected things would pop up"

Ash surveyed the deck, and contemplated on Gohm's last statement.

[raj87verma88]

I don't know how you write these dialogs Ash but they are simply awesome. Our little project is coming out good. I had thought we will make a story but it looks like we are going to make a novel. Will try to write some dialogs myself.